“An Improbable Spy” Book Reviews

REVIEW: This riveting spy thriller about an American merchant banker drawn into a world of espionage where no one can be trusted is one not to be missed.

As the story gets underway, Jack Devlin narrowly escapes Tehran during the 1979 hostage situation in Iran, losing almost all of his business, and more importantly, leaving the love of his life, Farideh, behind. He is subsequently approached by an old, trusted friend who offers him a devil’s bargain: become an expendable spy, one the agency will deny; help the CIA and British MI6 obtain the ledger of Farideh’s father, arms merchant Mustafa Khaki; and they will get Farideh out of Iran for him.

Devlin is sent on a wild roller coaster ride through the treachery and mayhem of the Middle East, into a circle of agents, double agents, defectors, and collaborators, where he discovers that the warning of the British MI6 Chief who trains him.

Read More
“In our business, things may not be quite as they seem” is an understatement and that signing up for this job could easily cost him and his girl friend their lives. Never being quite sure who to trust casts a dark curtain over everything Jack does. And in the end, well, you’ll have to read the book to find out who the real turncoats are.

The settings ring with authenticity. Collins’s descriptions of bazaars, street scenes, customs officials, and hotels in Tehran, Kuwait, and Egypt, and roadblocks manned by soldiers leading boys with AK-47’s, are vivid enough to convince anyone who has been in the Third World for any length of time that the author has been there, and not as a tourist.

The writing flows, the characters are engaging, and the passages showing MI6, the CIA, and Mossad deceiving each other to gain an advantage while “working together” are chilling.

In sum, this is a brilliantly written espionage tale — as good as it gets.

Also available as an ebook.

Source: Blue Ink Reviews

iUniverse, 262 pages, (paperback) $20.99, 9781532080104
(Reviewed: January 2020)


REVIEW: “An Improbable Spy” is a cryptic thriller: nothing is as it seems, and no one is who they say they are.

David Paul Collins’s timely historical spy novel An Improbable Spy has all the elements of a classic Cold War-era tale, as the CIA goes against the KGB, but with a Middle Eastern twist.The story begins with a chill on the streets of Moscow in 1980. KGB agent Vladimir Sudakov, who has information about Soviet machinations involving the American hostages in Iran, is about to betray his country on a metro platform, beneath the gaze of a mosaic of Lenin. In London, Jack Devlin, the owner of a struggling merchant banking business in Kuwait, is approached with a business proposition: his old friend Hugh, who’s now a CIA agent, will help Devlin sneak his love interest and her sister out of Tehran in exchange for an arms trafficker’s ledger.

Read More
Within this diverse cast exist characters whose lives are mini history lessons. There are Indian Gurkha soldiers, Sudanese Dinkas with their ritually scarred faces, and Omani dhow captains. Their stories are sometimes melancholy: Roosevelt Street in Tehran is recalled as having “been named in honor of the once special relationship between America and Iran.” Their conversations, accents, and dialects convey varied rhythms, from the Cockney used by a hotel concierge to bazaar negotiations.

Sly humor leavens the book’s life-and-death stakes. Devlin enjoys “entertaining lovelies until something came up. Sometimes it was the sun.” Chapter titles contribute, too, as with “Furlong in the Belfry,” while British agents have names like Algernon Trivelpiece and Pandora Quince. Evocative phrasing and imagery complement the book’s local color and atmosphere, helping to define disparate settings, as with “Perfumed scents of oranges from Lebanon blended with sticky sweet aromas of figs from the deltas of Basra and lemons from the Levant.”

Locations from today’s news are a prominent feature; the action jumps between world capitals, including Cairo, Damascus, and Tehran, with speed. There are clandestine meetings, information drops, and double-dealing between the compromised operatives of the CIA, KGB, and Great Britain’s MI6. These involve plenty of twists, especially when Israel’s Mossad shows up. A motorcycle chase through the alleyways of Tehran, as Devlin makes his final attempt to escape, features well-facilitated action.

Its people, plot, and places resonant, An Improbable Spy is a cryptic thriller: nothing is as it seems, and no one is who they say they are.

MICHELLE NEWBY (January 17, 2020)

Source: Clarion Reviews

iUniverse (Sep 19, 2019) Softcover $20.99 (262pp) 978-1-5320-8010-4


Disclosure: This article is not an endorsement, but a review. The author of this book provided free copies of the book and paid a small fee to have their book reviewed by a professional reviewer. Foreword Reviews and Clarion Reviews make no guarantee that the author will receive a positive review. Foreword Magazine, Inc. is disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255.​

REVIEW: “An Improbable Spy” by David Paul Collins is the story of a man as he tries to get the woman he loves out of danger, but he might have to give more than he can take.

Some Americans are being held hostage in Iran and the CIA is looking for someone who will be least likely to get caught in the thick of things. Jack Devlin is the man with enough motive to take the risk and get the job done.

Jack’s girlfriend Farideh is stuck there and he will do whatever it takes to get her back in his life. The price of her freedom: get the ledger of a dangerous arms trafficker.

The task is big and exceptionally dangerous, but Jack is ready to do it. He will get his Farideh back in his life. Can Jack do it? Does he have what it takes to fight for the woman he loves and make it out alive? “An Improbable Spy” by David Paul Collins is an interesting thriller novel with plenty of action and mystery to tie you to the book for hours. I loved the pace of the story and how well the author managed it all. He allowed the characters to grow, develop, and become their own person. It felt like the characters were taking the story wherever they wanted and that felt absolutely right.

I enjoyed the slew of characters the author added and how each character proved to be essential to the story. The background stories of most of the characters were amazing. I enjoyed how it allowed me to make a connection with them and feel their struggles. This was a brilliant story, one that gave me everything I expect from an action thriller.

Reviewed by Rabia Tanveer for Readers’ Favorite

REVIEW: Much has been written about the Iran hostage crisis, a diplomatic standoff between the United States and Iran.  After a group of Iranian college students belonging to the Muslim Student Followers of the Imam’s Line, who supported the Iranian Revolution, took over the embassy, fifty-two American diplomats and citizens were held hostage for 444 days from 04 November 1979 until 20 January 1981.

This is the background for David Paul Collins’ spy thriller, “An Improbable Spy“. In this story, set in the 1980s, when the students stormed the embassy, Jack Devlin, a merchant banker, narrowly escaped the chaos, leaving behind 80% of his business. He also had to leave behind the love of his life, Farideh. Determined to get her back at almost any cost, Jack accepts a deal with the CIA and Britain’s MI6 to return to Tehran to retrieve the ledger of a major arms trafficker and at the same time rescue Farideh. But spies will be spies and Jack soon finds that there is only one person involved in the saga who he can trust – himself. His quest to carry out his mission takes him to Kuwait, Cairo, London, and eventually to Tehran — where things don’t go quite as planned.

Great international spy thrillers do not have to be lengthy – “An Improbable Spy” is only 262 pages. And it is great from start to finish. It is clear from this flawless novel that David Paul Collins knows his stuff. Each scene is so descriptive it is easy to visualize what is going on, indeed where it is going on. Historical, political, geopolitical, and geographical locations are or at least appear to be accurate, perhaps because of the author’s own experiences in the Middle East during the Iranian Islamic Revolution.

The plot twists and turns as pages are quickly flipped to see where it is heading next. Through excellent characterization the characters come alive – heroes to be cheered on, villains to be despised. As astonishing as the dénouement is, the author has saved the biggest surprise for his Author’s Note which follows. This taut, tense, page-turning thriller is highly recommended.

Reviewed by Darryl Greer for Readers’ Favorite

REVIEW: “An Improbable Spy” by David Paul Collins is a fast-paced, actionpacked thriller that explores the theme of espionage in an international setting.

It follows the story of Jack Devlin, an American businessman who loses almost all his business and flees Tehran when radical Islamic students storm the US Embassy in 1979. Dozens of Americans are held hostage, but he has a narrow escape, and while he must live with his losses, the greater loss is Farideh, his girlfriend whom he has left behind in Iran.

But an opportunity, one fraught with danger, is offered to him by the CIA. Going back to Iran to steal the ledger of one of the most powerful arms dealers in the world, Mustafa Khaki, his girlfriend’s father, is the only opportunity to reconnect with his love. This is a terrific story that follows an unusual spy not only tasked with stealing a very important ledger but one who equally finds himself entangled in a plot that could sink America. Can he get all the intel required to unravel the deal between Russia and Iran and bring home his girlfriend?

That question stays in the reader’s mind. It is a twisty story that features very complex and believable characters. The protagonist is a sophisticated character; he is not trained in the military but must navigate a conflict-prone landscape. I loved the crisp writing and gorgeous descriptions. David Paul Collins writes an international setting that will stay vivid in the minds of readers. The plot is accomplished and while it is hard to predict what can happen next, the reader’s curiosity deepens through every scene. An Improbable Spy is nothing short of a spellbinding, entertaining page-turner. I loved the story as much as the writing.

Reviewed by Ruffina Oserio for Readers’ Favorite

REVIEW: In “An Improbable Spy” by David Paul Collins, in November 1979, merchant banker Jack Devlin’s world falls apart when the US embassy in Tehran is stormed by radical Muslim terrorists and hostages are taken.

He is forced to leave his business and girlfriend, Farideh, and escape from Iran. Now he is given the opportunity to rescue Farideh and her sister Leah. The opportunity comes in the form of a joint mission by the CIA and MI6. In return for their safety, Jack must return to Iran and retrieve a ledger containing all the clients and sources of the biggest and most dangerous arms dealer in the Middle East, Mustafa Khaki.

The KGB is also rumored to be aiding the Iranians to prevent a successful US rescue of the hostages. Devlin must also make contact with a KGB double agent to extract intel on the Russians’ involvement in the embassy siege. If Devlin is unsuccessful, the secret services will deny all knowledge of the mission; if he is successful there is no guarantee he will not be double-crossed himself. “An Improbable Spy” by David Paul Collins is an absolute adrenalin rush. The descriptive accounts of the places and events, especially at the roadside checkpoints, were completely believable. Devlin was a realistic character but an unlikely candidate for the mission.

His love for Farideh forced him into a dangerous situation that he was not trained for. Each character was interesting, multi-layered, and introduced gradually so they didn’t detract from the story. Khaki and his second in command, Ali, were chilling characters who were capable of the most horrific brutality. I loved the twists and turns in the plot and the obstacles Devlin had to overcome were gripping. The psychological game of cat and mouse between Devlin and Khaki is compelling.

You are really kept second-guessing if Jack will ever escape; his mission becomes more dangerous the longer he remains in Iran. The author has obvious personal experience of the Middle East and their culture and I wasn’t surprised to learn that he was in Iran at the time of the siege.

Review: Reviewed by Lesley Jones for Readers’ Favorite

REVIEW: “An Improbable Spy” by David Paul Collins is set in London, Egypt, Iran, and Kuwait at the time when a party of Americans in Tehran were taken captive in the longest hostage crisis in history.

The hero, Jack Devlin, is a banker with interests in the Middle East. He is on the point of losing his fortune since it was extremely unwise for westerners to enter Iran where Jack’s assets are located. His problems are further complicated by his love for Farideh, the Jewish daughter of Mustafa Khaki. The Iranian arms dealer’s other daughter, Leah, is on dialysis and needs a kidney transplant.

In return for her medication and removal from Iran, he promises to reinstate Jack’s money. Enter MI6, introducing spies with improbable names, and then the CIA butts in and Mossad get involved too. They are all after Mustafa Khaki and Jack is the only one who can get close to him. Each of the services is relying on Jack to enter and leave Iran not once but twice. However, one person on his team is not on the same side. David Paul Collins’ An Improbable Spy is quite a complicated book. It takes a while to get going, as Jack Devlin is recruited and trained in London. Then it speeds up and keeps up the pace moving from Cairo to Kuwait and Iran.

The descriptions of life in the Middle Eastern countries are vivid and authentic and I was not surprised to learn the author had spent time there. As a character, Jack bounces off the page, but he is one of many including some interesting and strange members of the British Secret Service. The whole story builds to a rather improbable climax but through it all, I saw a lot of underlying humor as characters popped up unexpectedly in different places. I suspect this will not be the only book starring Jack Devlin as he begins to enjoy his work as a spy.

Reviewed by Lucinda E Clarke for Readers’ Favorite